flame

warm lungs; rise

as they gloat with rage.

the streaming outburst

of persistent steam.

still, nurturing space

stagnant enough for

this flickering flame.

 

 

 

 

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5 Comments

  1. Wow you described the core element of a flame in such a splendid way, thanks for sharing such an incredibly crafted post! According to your convenience please do read some of my writings as well, would love to know what you think about them 🙂

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